Hallo zusammen, da ich mir nach wie vor nicht sicher bin, ob das überhaupt in den "Home-Recording" Thread passt möchte ich mal einen Teil eines Songs den ich gerade schreibe zeigen. Zur Zeit habe ich eine leichte Schreibblockade, würde mich aber über Feedback zum Text bisher sehr freuen:
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Working title: "A Cry For Help"
===I'm sitting at home, just at my PC.
The nights turning longer by an hour or three.
When I need to sleep outside things turn bright,
living in night's darkness afraid of the light.Normal times, why would they matter to me?
It just takes the internet, for me to feel free.
The silent cries for help deep inside,
are always well hidden by the virtual ride.
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chorus
===Help me, get me out of this place,
tell me what I need to know.
Oh help me, get me out of this place,
tell me where I need to go.===
end chorus
===Sitting here thinking, as of late,
what it is that makes me hesitate.
Ending my life sounds appealing to me,
but a low voice inside me won't let me be.Telling great stories of a better life,
a future blessed with children and a caring wife.
I do want to go but I keep holding on,
hoping at some point the voice will be gone.
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chorus
===Help me, get me out of this place,
tell me what I need to know.
Oh help me, get me out of this place,
tell me where I need to go.===
end chorus
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